Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Some individuals spend a lot of cash attending cultural or sports events. Could it be a great or a thing that is bad?

BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Definitely a good development, gives something for individuals to wish to. It most begets that are likely revenues for the performers and promoters , that should ultimately lead to a even more events. This undoubtedly contributes to greater monetary and wealth that is cultural a society. Take for example the English Premier League (EPL), this entertainment spectacle has taken considerable wealth into cities such as Manchester, Liverpool and London. Higher ticket prices result in better wages for football stars, which result in more quality players planning to play within the EPL, resulting in a cons >high net-worth individuals surviving in these cities. There has undoubtedly been a positive self-fulfilling cycle of improvement and quality, fuelled by increasing prices. Furthermore high prices will most likely mean higher tax revenues when it comes to government, this is certainly definitely very theraputic for society.

P2 – Same, but connect with a cultural event – ballet – opera.

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What we’re planning to do is glance at about 5 or 6 IELTS Task 2 questions.

And together we’re going to work through what we’re planning to write for every paragraph.

I’m going to be quite quick but i recently wish to show you the procedure i personally use for when I’m writing my essays.

And I do write a lot of essays ’cause I find out

the more I write, the easier it gets (logically).

Not to mention being a speaker that is native I don’t have to check it.

Although, I will admit

my spelling is not fantastic.

However, I got Microsoft Word and things like that for many associated with the other problems (usually the vowels and stuff).

But anyway, let’s get started.

To start with, good luck to Shuko and Hamilian.

The two online students that are gonna make the test.

I’ve been working together with them looking to get ideas working on the speaking,

get ideas for essays,

focusing on their grammar,

and I’m pretty certain they’re going to do it.

So we’ll see. I’ll let you understand how it goes.

But I’m pretty certain it can be done by them.

They’ve been working quite hard (especially me essays) shuko… she never stop sending.

Let’s get started.

So I’ve decided to take question from about three or four subjects.

Let’s get going.

It is better for students to work before the university study?“Do you think”

“Use reasons and examples that are specific support your choice.”

Because of this essay, I decided “Yes, it is advisable.”

For the 1st paragraph I said:

“The student would get practical experience,”

“they custom writings get contacts,”

“they get on-the-job skills.”

That’s very good collocation to use “on-the-job skills.”

And then to prove my point, I give an illustration and I say,

“Studies through the UK Government show that graduates with work experience are two times as prone to find employment.”

So that it’s quite believable, that example.

Not to mention, these are merely rough ideas but it’s a idea that is solid.

And I’m going to say “yes” from beginning to the conclusion.

I’m not going to write a discussive essay because there’s no need to.

I agree totally by what the question says.

Then for question 2, once more “yes.” A second reason.

So I’ll say, “Can you continue the very first argument?”

I’ll say, “It’s better preparation, possiblity to improve social skills, close the gap between academia together with private sector…”

Also more collocations there: “social skills,” and “private sector.”

“It also helps the student to commit…”

“It also helps the student before they invest in a long term plan.”

So it helps them decide. Then for my example, I said:

“One out of six students will change their advanced schooling course while at university.”

In the event that you actually glance at the presentation on a slideshow or in the video on YouTube,

You’ll see that the notes, they’re not sentences that are full. It’s just a bullet that is few, random ideas, all come up with.

And I’ve used the shortened version (i did son’t say “university” I just put “uni”).

‘Cause during this period, my grammar doesn’t have to be perfect.

The spelling doesn’t need to be perfect.

I’m ideas that are just getting building the essay.

In this podcast, we’re just planning to have a look at paragraph 1 and paragraph 2.

‘Cause introductions and conclusions could be written once you’ve got your main ideas for your system paragraphs.

… And that is where you select up most points.

Next question… Also related to education…

“Some people believe that children must do organized activities within their spare time while some think that children must certanly be free to do what they need to do within their time that is free.

Not the greatest written question there but anyway…

“Which viewpoint can you agree with?”

“Use specific reasons and examples to guide your answer.”

Quickly, I’m writing down ideas. I’m going to say:

“There’s lots of benefits in letting the mind wonder.”

“Children can express themselves.”

“They can find themselves.”

“They can perform whatever they prefer and excel at.”

Like I said, ideas. Ideas. Just getting them down. Maybe I’ll use 2 of these in the body paragraph that is actual.

Then I’ve got an example… or a example that is believable

(I invented this however it doesn’t matter.)

(I invented this however it’s believable.)

“Recent research has revealed 12% of school students dislike physical education, therefore if sports were chosen it be unfair for this minority.”

Yeah? That’s believable. That’s believable. It’s about 12%.

I remember in school, there’s a few that didn’t’ like sports, therefore it’s believable.

I’m not saying, “99% or all students hate physical activity” because that will just be insanely inaccurate.

And also, notice the vocabulary I used.

I’ve used the collocations needless to say, “physical education”

but I also used, “dislike” i did son’t say “hate” or “absolutely disgust” because this is certainly very language that is strong.

And also this is an academic essay therefore we have to limit it a little bit.

We can’t be so absolute.

Now, my paragraph that is second focuses the price and what will be necessary.